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Tuesday, 18 March 2014
Short Recount
I was learning to write a recount.
I found this work easy .
one thing I did well in this was writing the recount.
One thing I could do better is make it better.
Overall I thought it was fun.
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
You started well as our first piece of recount writing in Term 1. You will need to be clear about the senses you used to make the observations you did, in the garden.
You could be more detailed and think of some language features you might add e.g metaphor.
1 comment:
You started well as our first piece of recount writing in Term 1. You will need to be clear about the senses you used to make the observations you did, in the garden.
You could be more detailed and think of some language features you might add e.g metaphor.
Miss H
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